inside

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Summary

cross the river of life with me. with us. in love, in pain, in hope, in suffering. finding deliverance, transcendence, inside. life has chosen to pull me to the depths of wherever my mind can go, and inside is a world that remains unexplored. In every vicinity of my soul is filled, with wonders even I haven't seen. Inside is a city of thoughts and feelings and I am the only inhabitant left to roam it

Genre:
Poetry
Author:
Jared Max
Status:
Ongoing
Chapters:
25
Rating:
4.5 2 reviews
Age Rating:
16+

inside.

I dwell among the places where heaven and hell meet,

Seeking to remove me from the spaces that cleave my heart too deep.


Every step in time, I see the stars and planets of people align,

In every moment, in every observable intertwine,

I sit in the throne of within my mind,

And see the space that retracts every personification in my life.


In every experience, words overflow from the peak of my tongue,

Ready to be written, waiting to be given,

To the people willing to care,

To the people willing to be shared.


Of the thoughts that linger in my mind, heart, and soul,

inside.

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Sarah Luongo: I'm a big fan of the format of the book- the concept of incorporating poems and within the story and sectioning off periods of the story with each poem. It made it easier to read, and made the unimaginable easier to comprehend. What some people may skip over may be the most important part in this...

Claut Cobalt: I'm not really a poem guru, but all I can give you is keep up the good work. I was head over heels on every line , you really had captured the moment that what the reader would find themselves in. It's professional yet keeping it light and easier to understand by all ages

riya gaba: I liked everything in the novel have no words to tell what I liked actually I could imagine what's going on and hope I'll find more stories like this.

lululie: This story made me cry, I knew it from the first chapter but who could resist this good story. Every chapter I read my heart hurt 😭

Michelle Ogden: Please don't leave it like this for long update soon

Deleted User: Read this all in one sitting, and I found them to be tragically beautiful.

laceyE56: It was a great book!!

RASmith: I truly enjoyed the few words which you wrote, I feel you have so much more to express and could build beautiful images with your words. Possibly expand and open your heart some more. I certainly for one would love to read more, keep writing and let your light shine.

moneeba554: It really amazing poem

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Sir Nilo: What a remarkable book. Wonderful poems. I can relate to some. Thank you for this amazing book.

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