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Life's Love Letter

By Davon4Real All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Chapter 1

To Whom It May Concern,

Please excuse me for my recent attack

This pain I feel won't be held back

Trying so hard so to forgive and forget

Gamblings not my game, I still end up losing the bet

Alot has been said but no actions have been taken

Never the victim, always the suspect but you have me sadly mistaken

With you always to the very end, as much as you let me down, Im gonna always be your closest friend

P.S. I LOVE YOU!! Believe me when I say "I still care". So whenever you decide to come back home, I'll make sure someone is there.

Love Always,

LIFE

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CalvinPeat: This is a great concept, and you've done a largely excellent job of capturing the voice of Mal.You convey Mal's inner struggle well. Perhaps, though, you could reflect the hope in verses 13-17 of Psalm 90 a bit more. A suggestion: in the current version, Mal seems to be losing hope in the idea of...

Medley_Cafe: I love poetry and within the first 2 that I read I know I love your written voice!It flows and rolls from the tongue and even gave me some goosebumps!Poetry is something that so many take for granted. I find that it connects people's hearts, since true poetry is written from the heart even when w...

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