Get Free Copy

100 free copies left

This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.

0
Free copy left
You can read our best books
preety_lady_serenity would love your feedback! Got a few minutes to write a review?
Write a Review

Little Fluttering Hearts

By preety_lady_serenity All Rights Reserved ©

Children / Poetry

Chapter 1

I am the woman that has 15 children.
Little fluttering hearts
That I juggle every day;
Each with its own sensitivity
Trembling in my palms.

There's pride in my eyes
When I see each fluttering heart.
Glimmers of uniqueness
Challenge to my core.
And when they learn
It's my sweetest victory;
My purpose in this world.

When as big thumping hearts
They will leave me
One day,
To take on life
To battle decay;
I will look back
When they were fluttering hearts
And smile and wave while a memory 
I become.

Write a Review Did you enjoy my story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, preety_lady_serenity
Continue Reading
Further Recommendations

wildweeder: I found the story "The Last Starry Night" to be exciting and entertaining (and a little bit scary in parts). I loved the way the young people explained things to each other.The growth and development of the young Warriors that Johnny adopted was fun. Listening to Grandma talk to them in "wisdom s...

Meri Amber: The plot is creative, fun and addictive! The writing is superb and the characters are really well put together. Definitely highly recommeded!

eggs3447: Good luck winning the contest! I liked the writing and ideas. I hope you enjoyed writing it. -RoseSpecktor

Omega: In awe of this writer's ability to set a scene, all be it a dark and disturbing one. Feels true to the characters and shows a good understanding of the human psyche. Can recommend, but may touch a nerve if you have suffered abuse.

This story wasn't for you ?
Look at our most viral stories!
King's Lament

FreakyPoet: "you made me laugh, made me cry, both are hard to do. I spent most of the night reading your story, captivated. This is why you get full stars from me. Thanks for the great story!"

The Cyneweard

Sara Joy Bailey: "Full of depth and life. The plot was thrilling. The author's style flows naturally and the reader can easily slip into the pages of the story. Very well done."

This story wasn't for you ?
Look at our most viral story!
Spectra

Ro-Ange Olson: "Loved it and couldn't put it down. I really hope there is a sequel. Well written and the plot really moves forward."