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Pain of betrayal

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Summary

A poem that emphasizes the pain of love and deceit

Genre:
Poetry / Other
Author:
Muna-bluebells
Status:
Complete
Chapters:
6
Rating:
4.7 3 reviews
Age Rating:
13+

The love we share

I feel we have a connection

Our love is like a devotion

The mere mention of your name makes me quiver

Even your slightest touch gives me shiver

Our love will always linger

Just like the relation between our fingers


In our love there will always be fun,

And our love will so shine like the sun

We evolved and became love birds

Now our world revolves around each other


Our love is neither a delusion

Nor a confusion

We weren't forced into it

We were born for it

We will always love each other


Though the mere thought of you

not being around is killing

I will be more than willing to wait

Because at the end we will

be together loving each other

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ayoooobroo: This is very real and relatable and I truly love that in the story's also everything a hopeless romantic could want lol good job, keep it up.

maggiev8mv: I enjoyed this story. You keep the pace going and added lots of plot twists.Only criticism would be there are places more detail would enhance the story. But that's just my opinion. I'm off to read the next story. Thank you for sharing

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