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By Annabel Vigar All Rights Reserved ©

Other / Poetry



As liquid fire I burned,
Until I was born,
In dark caverns,
That taught me to breath,
Through valves of a heart,

As veins of the Earth I rested,
Crawling through layers,
Towards the Sun, my brother,
Who I will not see,
Before I am taken from the womb.

As a possession I am silent,
Solid and heavy like stone,
Only valuable to you,
After you have broken me away,
And left me as a naked soul.

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