Tears of Saturn

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poetry about my first massive depression and stress as a teenager

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Computer classes

I was slumped

If my chair

In computer

People thought

That i was


But that wasnt true

The stress got to me

And i died

As i sit there lifeless

I think about my

Miserable life

And how it ended

So miserably

The teacher calles the medical examiner

To pick up my body

They zip up my body bag

And carry me of to the


There the decide

To a full emergency autopsy

In case of an out break

But before they pick up

There tools

I tell them

"My body gave out from all the

Boredom and frustration,

I cannot use a computer

It took a toll on my

Brain and heart,"

I say

"They couldn't take the


Of this class."

They take my brain out

And my heart

And saw they they

Were both short cricuted

"The dead body was right

Cause of death

Heart attack and brain aneurism

At the same time,

Mannor of death

Natural causes due to stress,"

The close me up

And release my shell

To my parents

As i go one to

The next

Life to be


As a hedgehog

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