Losing again It aches and I'm tired

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Summary

Have you ever felt broken? Losing again and again? It becomes tiring. I just can't take it anymore.

Genre:
Poetry / Other
Author:
Myra Elysium
Status:
Complete
Chapters:
1
Rating:
n/a
Age Rating:
13+

Losing again It aches and I'm tired

Did you ever lose? Did you ever felt tired of losing again and again? Do you crave for a success? Do you feel like this as well:-

Today it hit me again

With an agonizing smile

I bore the blow

People say

You get used to it

I say

I'd rather die than it

Every time it hits

It aches a lot

Every tear, Every blood drop

It hurts a lot

You don't get used to it

Every new blow

Hurts more

Because the previous wound

Wasn't healed but ignored

One day they'll all open again

All the wounds ignored

Will pain again

And with the same agonizing smile

I am leaving this world

I wanted to win

But I lost my life as well

Losing again

From my life I retire

It's enough now

It aches and I am tired.


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