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Crimson Dawn

By LunasChild8 All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Romance

Chapter 1

Like a newborn Phoenix

I rose from the ashes of despair

I have my crimson angel to thank for that

With eyes the color of a shifting sea

And silken locks that burn with the sun's rays

His very soul glows in magnificent radiance

He is the fire the roars within me

I'm completely powerless against his pull

I'm empty and cold without his warmth

He is the crimson dawn that brings life to a colorless night

He was my beginning, he is my present

And he will be my end.


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