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Open Mind

By LunasChild8 All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Other

Chapter 1

Waking up every morning,

To the prospect of a new day.

Leaves me with an uncontrollable yearning,

To accomplish everything I want before my imagination goes away.


My open mind allows me no rest,

Until my dreams come true.

There's no room for mistakes; I'm filled with stress,

Your blissful ignorance is the only thing that I envy in you.


My open mind grants me the view,

Of the ever expanding big picture.

To question the facts believed to be true,

With no proof, and yet of which you are so sure.


Going to sleep every night,

Satisfied after a productive day.

Allows my spark to once more ignite,

And be mine to forever stay.


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