LunasChild8 would love your feedback! Got a few minutes to write a review?
Write a Review

What Could Have Been

By LunasChild8 All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Romance

Chapter 1

We once were strangers; and now our history passes by us in a blur,

We quickly became friends; I soon wished for our friendship to never end.


We had many laughs, we spent good times; the moments with him have allowed me to climb,

My own walls that enclosed me; I was so close, yet I'm still not free.


And then one day he upset the balance; he spoke the forbidden sentence,

It's true that he made me feel so at peace; yet I know it cannot be.


There's so much distance between us; I'm not sure if our bond will be enough,

To get us through the hardships; how did all of this begin?


I've got so much fear; he's so far away, and yet so near,

I cringe at the thought of my heavy heartache; I don't want to make the same mistake.


Deep down though, something within me yearns; to have someone waiting for me to return,

I have to let go of my past; and enjoy these moments while they last.


Maybe one day; when I'm no longer afraid,

My heart can open up anew; and finally say: "I love you too."


Write a Review Did you enjoy my story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, LunasChild8
Continue Reading
Further Recommendations

SandraHan1: This story is very descriptive, with vivid scenes from the very beginning, which made for a good scene setting. I love the symbolism in names, such as “Naysayers”, “Hadd”, etc . The story itself is revolutionary, intriguing, emotional and exciting. I was very pleased to see that there is a happy ...

heavyonbooks: I admire your creativity. You have written a great piece. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at exzordersplrwso AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks.

Bad: The Setting was applicable to the characters, the readers can relate to the story.The author use the POV which the readers can feel, and the author keeps hook in every chapter and it will make you to rethink about everything.It was a hooking story, since from the beginning to the end, it has many...

Bad: The Setting was a perfect the characters and their chemistry between them, and the fact that they are relatable. The story also has some sick plot twists, which I never saw coming.The POV of the story was used in the story, if you read the story you could imagine the thought of ever characters.Th...

Katherine Drotar: Loved your story. it gripped me right from the first page and I couldn't put it down. You are a very talented writer. your main character was strong while still being emotional. The only hard part I found was the repetition of the story from 2 different points. (it made me want to skip ahead) I u...

gdholt: A very believable story and an emotional read.. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys getting lost in a great book. Keep on writing.

More Recommendations

Ilanea Zavala: I loved it and well I really hope you continue writing more to the story.

Lauren Kabanyana: It's simply amazing, the story is touching and has you captivated while reading! I loved it! Would read it over and over again. I applaud the way this book was able to evoke a mixture of feelings. I felt everything the two main characters felt from the start to end, i would recommend this novel t...

Alkira Joan: Great story, I found it hard to read especially the dialogue. You just need to fix up some spelling errors and the gramma .I enjoyed this book. was a little hard to get though.,.,..,.,.,,..,.,.,, , , , ,.,, , , , , , , ,., ,,.,,,,,

{{ contest.story_page_sticky_bar_text }} Be the first to recommend this story.

About Us:

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.