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I am You: You are Me

By LunasChild8 All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Other

Chapter 1

I've had enough! I can't do this anymore.

Stop acting like that; you've been through all this before.

It's not the same; everything just keeps getting worse.

Don't be like that. Think of it as your life getting more diverse.

There is no joy in life; it's been sucked dry from mine.

Relax, alright? Everything will be just fine.

The world is like a ferocious jungle; I've got so much fear!

It's okay to be afraid; I will always be here.

There's no way I can survive; I feel nothing inside!

Stop! Don't think like that. This is your life.

But I feel so lost; it's like nothing matters.

Take control sweetheart; you are your own master.

Nobody likes me; they say that I'm too needy.

Hey! Don't listen to them. You're pretty damn likable to me.

I've had enough! The only phrase that seems to work for me is "I cannot."

We're opposites; deal with it. Quite frankly, I'm the only friend you've got!


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