Secret Feelings...

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Summary

Hey everyone, I am not a poet but tried to be one. I have only wrote this poem in the memory of my late big grandfather who recently left us. Secret Feelings are his feelings, he was suffering from a disorder called hallucinations. So, I wrote on one of the scene in it. Hope you'll like it. I really did my best in this, but if there's anything, which is incorrect, please do tell me in the comments. It will really mean a lot. -thank you very much for at least giving my first poem a try. ❤

Genre:
Poetry / Other
Author:
Anshita
Status:
Complete
Chapters:
1
Rating:
4.8 5 reviews
Age Rating:
16+

Secret Feelings

Below a sky as a blue ocean, there's a concrete road and buses traveling on it,

To go to my hometown which is far a bit.

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Familiar voices calling, 'MAHAVIR' my name,
But I miserably fail to send signals to my brain.
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Because....
Because, the image I am watching disappears and Now I sees an empty wall,
I let those salty droplets fall..
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When I realize, what I've seen,
It made my heart broken as it was just a Deja Vu dream.
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Lying on a bed is like an icy snow,
Remembering about non-existing people feels like a reality show.
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Feeling tiredness and numbness,
I close my eyes to relax but sees only darkness.
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Because....

Because, I wasn't a loser, but my body gave up after living so long,

Even in the heaven, I can still hear my family singing a ritual song.

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My ashes are only left;

On which later God will take control,

But my love will never end for all...

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