Can’t you see?

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There’s this girl who goes through abuse with her parent. She doesn’t like the fact that she does. Yet, she can’t control it. She doesn’t like when she gets hurt or anything. At the end of the poem there’s a scripture.

Poetry / Other
Dinah D.
5.0 2 reviews
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Can you Stop?

Can you put your belt down

Can you undo your fist

Can you put your slipper down

Can you stop yelling at me

Can you stop using curse words towards me

Can you leave me alone

Can you stop making me feel weak

Can you get out my personal space

Can you stop making me you’re personal slave

Can you stop making me forget who I really am

Can you stop making me do you’re things, that you have to do

Can you stop making think my siblings, is my responsibility

Can you stop being so mean

Can you stop lying to me

Can you stop hurting me

Can you stop manipulating me

Can you stop everything

Can you just open you’re eyes

I’m hurting

And you’re the reason why i’m hurting

I’m scared of you and that shouldn’t be

You know you’re doing wrong

So stop doing wrong and do right

God don’t like ugly

You reap what you sow

Meaning you may do something bad to someone or just something bad in general, and it’ll come back around just like karma

Galatians 6:7 it states “Be not deceived; God is not mocked: for whatsoever a man soweth, that shall he also reap. So maybe you should think twice about what you do to me.

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