Cracked

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Summary

Love, loss, etc... typical poetic self pity, lol. A little humor scattered here and there to cut the bitterness and make what I'm dishing out a little more palatable.

Genre:
Poetry
Author:
Nawleans
Status:
Ongoing
Chapters:
10
Rating:
n/a
Age Rating:
13+

Cracked Foundation

Tiny cracks in our foundation

Invisible fissures foretell damnation

We laugh and smile and raise the kids

And fail to notice as love's power skids


Temptations spread like malignant tumors

Innocent smiles to insidious rumors

It's a wonderful feeling to be wanted

A debilitating guilt to want it


Love dies slowly, neglected and worn

It's fabric faded, tattered and torn

Heartfelt promises fade away

As sure as the dew in the harsh light of day



Copyright: All rights reserved. Nobody can use, redistribute, reiterate, reproduce, copy, or in any other way incorporate what I have written or I might get really mad. I may even sue you. I live smack-dab in the middle of a town filled with starving lawyers. And not just that, I have a lot of time on my hands and could really use some of your money.

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