Why did my star get lost

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Summary

I'm an poet

Genre:
Poetry
Author:
은은한
Status:
Ongoing
Chapters:
1
Rating:
n/a
Age Rating:
13+

twenty

If you pat a cigarette on the shoulder, it will bring the saddest snow in the world.

Whose breath did the red rage that seemed to burn all of it?

Is it you or me?

Spit out your obsession with dreams and love.

Now that you're an adult, swallow life.

We're not the ones who lit the fire.

It's a flint-like world that strikes sharply.

Get your act together. What do you see?

Drink the truth and you can be promoted.

I'll feel free like that white cloud.

If the snow as sad as the age of breath is soiled on the earth, this land will also banish us to heaven.

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