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a lovers moment

By Andthenitended All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Romance

Chapter 1

And in one swift motion

our lips collided

a spark of love

dancing like a crack

of lightning.

The feeling it gave

sent chills down to my

very soul.

The feeling of her lips

pushing an impression

into my memory,

her body clung to mine

forcing mine

to take mold.

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