AN IDEAL PLACE

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Summary

THIS POEM WILL SURELY IGNITE THE MINDS OF THE PEOPLE WHO ARE STOPPING THE EARTH FROM CHANGING INTO AN IDEAL PLACE!!!

Genre:
Poetry
Author:
Utso Duary
Status:
Complete
Chapters:
1
Rating:
n/a
Age Rating:
13+

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An Ideal Place

A place of freedom, where happiness is there,

Where no one can stop you to roam here and there.

The knowledge is a river where everyone can drink

But there is no competition of yes”I am the king”.

The place of grounds but the houses are less

Where no one can say “playing is nonsense”.

The people have not got the taste f poverty,

Where everyone will get the taste of liberty.

The rivers are soft and the grounds are green

The sea of flowers is red and pink.

The fields are big and the cows are free,

Where the cowboys used to sing sitting under the tree.

Their songs are sweet with the dancing wheat!!

The clouds are fluffy and the wing is happy.

These kinds of things always wondered my mind,

But I know these will not come in this real mankind.

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Sarah Luongo: I'm a big fan of the format of the book- the concept of incorporating poems and within the story and sectioning off periods of the story with each poem. It made it easier to read, and made the unimaginable easier to comprehend. What some people may skip over may be the most important part in this...

Fabia Scali-Warner: Wow. This works reminds me of Allen Ginsberg, and at times even Prevert. The arching storyline is interesting, but I loved the care given to every verse. What a gem!

aizza2611: The poetries made the book soooo much better. Your writing is Just so so AMAZING and you are so talented. Loved this book Just as much as i liked your other book "texting him". 12/10 😍

auroraaurora1288ag: Every single one of these poems made a mark in my mind I love them. I love how you describe your emotions so deeply, it’s truly beautiful

Elvis Presley : This is an excellent poem with ups and downs..So good..I recommend for all.

apioelizabeth33: I loved the book so much, and I would recommend it to myself..

Rosanna Wiltshire: Great plot, Charlotte is getting slightly annoying at this point, but hopefully she matures further in. Check for spelling and grammatical errors within the story. I found myself re reading a few times because of the spelling of some words or "you're" being used instead of "your".

doveyoga888: 5 stars, I recommend this to anyone looking for encouragement, compassion, or motivation

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