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As If

By FukubeSouhei All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Romance

As If

At that night,

the waves

danced on the shore

as if they'd never meet again.

the moon

shone over the earth

as if declaring its last evening.

the stars

gathered in your eyes

as if the sun will swallow them forever.

and we

played pretend with our words

as if we were the same as the universe.

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