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Sky

By Chibi_Kitsuni All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Sky

I have an enemy
A girl dressed in sky
With hair of ebony
After her I've sent a spy

In shadows with silver dagger
I smile at the sky
And rush to meet her
She asks why, my answer is a lie

You did wait until the others were all gone?
She was taken care of alone
I didn't even get a chance to bade her goodbye
What a pity, my lady of sky

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Alex Rushmer: Honestly, poetry is not really my thing, and I don't have a lot of feedback that I can give. However, I thought that this was written powerfully in a way that affects the reader. Just don't mistake depressing for being the same as deep. You can have one without the other. This is only my opinion,...

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CalvinPeat: This is a great concept, and you've done a largely excellent job of capturing the voice of Mal.You convey Mal's inner struggle well. Perhaps, though, you could reflect the hope in verses 13-17 of Psalm 90 a bit more. A suggestion: in the current version, Mal seems to be losing hope in the idea of...

WaywardKnight3: I liked this poem overall. It brought up a lot of thoughts to me about our place in the world and the place of the things around us. Plus I am proud to be of Scando lineage and perhaps that has a part to play in my enjoyment. Either way good work.

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