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Sky

By Chibi_Kitsuni All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Sky

I have an enemy
A girl dressed in sky
With hair of ebony
After her I've sent a spy

In shadows with silver dagger
I smile at the sky
And rush to meet her
She asks why, my answer is a lie

You did wait until the others were all gone?
She was taken care of alone
I didn't even get a chance to bade her goodbye
What a pity, my lady of sky

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