The Pit

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Poetry / Mystery
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The Pit

Every soul that passes the gate,

Has passed a test of fate,

Trudging along on tired feet,

Almost there, refusing to be beat,

Feeling the thump of the heart,

Not long to go until the start,

This journey feels too long,

Knowing the need to remain strong,

Nearing the light,

The end goal in sight,

It's almost time,

Just a bit further to climb,

Saying goodbye to the controlled,

Shivering in the cold,

Taking the last short step,

Letting out a warm breath,

This is it,

The pit

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