The Pit

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Poetry / Mystery
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The Pit

Every soul that passes the gate,

Has passed a test of fate,

Trudging along on tired feet,

Almost there, refusing to be beat,

Feeling the thump of the heart,

Not long to go until the start,

This journey feels too long,

Knowing the need to remain strong,

Nearing the light,

The end goal in sight,

It's almost time,

Just a bit further to climb,

Saying goodbye to the controlled,

Shivering in the cold,

Taking the last short step,

Letting out a warm breath,

This is it,

The pit

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Oluwatosin: I like the plotting and the author writing style,I recommend the books for sci-fi readers and the author needs to work on the punctuation and let us know who is who,all in all it's such a great book....!!!!!!

Brian: Great read if you can over look all of the grammatical errors.

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Biva: The story line seems a bit rushed

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Terri Ferguson: I liked how the story kept you interested wanting to know what the next word was what was going on and how was he going to solve each case it never got boring you just stayed involved great book I would recommend this book to family and friends

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savvvyy: Super good story, I think the plot could be worked on a little bit and more character development on Logan and Anne at the beginning. With Logan being a Lycan he doesn’t come off as possessive or dangerous nor does the pack of Lycans that arrive later in the story. Super great writing style and I...

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