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Remember

By Srsiri All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Romance

Remember

Do you remember the time

When my hot lips met yours

When back then it was a crime

And we had to hide behind closed doors?


Do you remember the feeling of my touch

My rough hands gently holding your form

You told me it was all just too much

That this was just the quiet before the storm.


Do you remember the look in my eyes

When I told you how much I loved you

That I wouldn’t say any goodbyes

And my feelings were all true


Do you remember when I told you of my plan

That I had figured out when

You knew I was the only one that can

The reason why you looked past all the other men


Well my darling the time is now

Remember this moment as I get down on one knee

This is something your parents must allow

For I’m asking you to spend an eternity with me


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