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Princess Marjorie

By Browniesarethebest All Rights Reserved ©

Horror / Poetry

Princess Marjorie

There once was a princess named Marjorie

Who danced and played on her land

It’s quite interesting, her story

As she lost her left foot and hand


Marjorie was dancing along the ground

When she came upon a witch

This witch was old, wrinkly, and round

And was covered in a cloak loosely stitched


Marjorie turned and made to run

But the witch was oh so fast

She grabbed her hair, made up in a bun

Yanked it, and the spell was cast


Marjorie sobbed, cried, and yelled

But none of this seemed to phase her

The witch was strong and her grip held

As the spell made to enter


Pain flared inside the poor girl

As her left foot and hand fell with a thump

Marjorie gasped and made to hurl

As she stared at her hand, which was only a stump


There once was a princess named Marjorie

Who sat and cried all day

It’s quite interesting, her story

As she would never again dance and play
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