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Beth

By Browniesarethebest All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Romance

Beth

Her smile was bright

Like the shining sun

Her eyes were full of light

She definitely was the one


Her laugh was like bells

Ringing with joy

Her voice, which quelled

Even the most annoyed


You laid next to her

Staring at the stars

Thinking of the future

With her in your arms


You went to propose

But she had a surprise

They were both without clothes

And her words full of lies


Your smile was dark

Like the new moon night

As you stood in the park

Jumping with all your might


The water was freezing

Your body went into shock

Your lungs were wheezing

Until you hit a rock


You closed your eyes

Embracing sweet Death

You thought, as you said your goodbyes,

Of your beautiful, sweet Beth
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