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We'll See

By Srsiri All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

We'll see

Will we see
Who we're meant to be
Will we see
Who has the key

The key to your heart or mine
What will stand the test of time
What will turn the tide
To where we'll have nothing to hide

Will it come to be
That you and I can be free
Just you and me
Will we be able to see

Time flows ever onward
Where will our lives steer toward
Will it be us against it all
Or is this just pride before the fall

If you ask me
I think we'll see
What we're meant to be
That we may be the key
To what sets us free




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CalvinPeat: This is a great concept, and you've done a largely excellent job of capturing the voice of Mal.You convey Mal's inner struggle well. Perhaps, though, you could reflect the hope in verses 13-17 of Psalm 90 a bit more. A suggestion: in the current version, Mal seems to be losing hope in the idea of...

crissy: Awesome work. The characters are so beautifully flawed and easy to relate to. The protagonist Bethany Hill is a woman that I would definitely want to meet in real life. The author has managed to make me visualize the story like a movie. The two time frames of past and present are also so beautifu...

ItsAnnier: Great original idea! Long poems don't often hold me, but yours did to the end and made me want more of the story. Was it a Crime of passion with the murderer returning to the crime scene? I hope further poems will tell me more!

Lykeios: I'm not sure what else I can say about this poem.I enjoyed it because it made me feel things. The depth and meaning here was impressive. As I read it I could remember how it feels to lose love. However, there is something hopeful in losing love as I've learned that there is always more love to fi...

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