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You and I

By Hearm Jan All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Other

Blurb

My collection of ideas that would never be novels, for I don't have much time, Mix my old and new.

Shaky Seedy Spicy Story-Spumy 2


Midnight comes forth the harsh of their screaking
Moon is grinning in the midst of winked stars
In a path you are alone, keep walking
Trees on each corner will drown you to doubt

New born sobs, “Sob... sob…” Chill runs on your spine
Superstition is deceiving your mind
The sound retains harnessed the throb of your heart
And now frigidness is looming behind

“Hoot… hoot… hoot…” The sound is boosting your fright
Skin’s hairs raise in this terrifying night
As the new born is kept on in crying
Instinct is doubtfully tracing the root

“Sob… sob… sob…” And slow rustle of bushes,
you find a child, thought says, This is madness!
Yet arms are shivering to tap its head
Silence smashes as you carry this poorish

And now those wrinkles retell you to rest
For them are heartless to face their madness
That I’m as a doctor as that poor child you’d saved
Until death, I carry on your kindness

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