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Snowflakes

By Fangirling_Meerkat All Rights Reserved ©

Mystery / Poetry

Chapter 1

If you just look at the snowflakes you’ll see them falling down; down, down, down.

But that’s not true.

That’s not what they do.

If you really look at them you’ll see that they are whirling, dancing.

If you focus on them you’ll see that they fall and then stop.

For just a second they’ll stop their fall and change direction.

They go up.

They hang weightless in they sky.

And for just a moment they will stay there, weightless, before hurtling towards the ground, crashing into the millions of other snowflakes.

And mabye that’s what life is.

Falling; bustling towards the ground at a million miles per hour, before stopping and staying in the air, weightless.

And mabye that moment; that moment of weightlessness, that moment of freedom, is worth all that crashing and falling and burning.

Mabye the happiness is worth the pain.

Mabye that feeling of being weightless is worth the crash.

Mabye it’s all worth it.
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