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Which way

By Srsiri All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Which Way

I see what you did there
Brushing up against me
Probably on a wild dare
Couldn't leave things be

You're driving me crazy
The closer you are to me
Everything else gets hazy
But you're crystal clear to see

This game you play
Will it lead to something real
Or will it simply decay
Please tell me the deal

We'll flirt all night
Before heading out
Doesn't make it right
And I'm starting to doubt

This pattern set in stone
Is it right or wrong
This is something you have to own
You have to be strong

A fork in our road
Which way do you choose
This answer I'm owed
And I don't like to lose

So take my hand
Or leave right now
I'm ready to make a stand
Or will you take a bow

Will this become something real
Or are you just playing
You know how I feel
Do you need anymore swaying

One final last word
Before last call
You know this is absurd
Its time to give it your all

Lets leave this place
Your hand in mine
A change of pace
It'll all
be
fine

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