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Other / Poetry


Gather round for the tale of falling asleep,

Where you enter the world of hope and dreams.

Close your eyes, calm your breathing, fall asleep,

And enter the world meant for you and me.

Settle down, rest your soul after a good day,

Perhaps tomorrow you’ll have new things to play.

Go outside, watch the sun; enjoy your day,

Remember the memories that made you stay.

Lose your frown, it’s not worth your energy,

It’s easier said, but you’ll be free.

Loosen up, don’t be tense; release your energy,

Never lose hope; always believe.

In the promise of a new start,

Nothing can drag you from among the stars,

Where there’s gloom there’s glee; don’t be sore,

Release your wings, and up you soar.

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