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Alone along the halls,
Observing who stands and who falls.
Beaten by those who boast power
And revolted by strangers.
Ruling their little worlds –
Do they even care? No, I haven’t heard.
It’s amazing how no one stands by me.
No one does - But no, I’m still not free.
I need someone to see –
See how reality’s killing me.
To take the pain way,
Assuring me everything’s okay.
I imagine how life would be,
If everyone’s actually jolly.
If no one else wonders how it seems
Then being lonely is fine with me.
It’s better to be on your own
Than to keep up with their hatred souls.
Acting like we are all clicking
But all we need is fixing.
~ P. M. Roya
Richard D. Cooper: I wish I could write poetry like this. It's clever because it also tells a story, too. I like the flow of it, the way sentences slip together as they should. Very good indeed. I have also started to read your others works, and will review them when finished. Keep going. Never stop.
maxniederhofer: Kara,I loved this. The one suggestion I would make is to show me, don't tell me. E.g."Now look at your skin / It is beautiful / You are beauty pure."It might be better to use more evocative imagery and language to make me feel, i.e. truly comprehend, the pure beauty, rather than telling me it is ...
Shubh Guru: when i'm reading this novel, I remember all my school days, all i feel like i m back to my old days, all the misery come to "bay" and how she come back like a shinning star are so good...this is my first book and i love this because it contains all the thing, love ,betrayl,losing some one who lo...
Barbara Ivusic: I really loved this poem. Perfect use of imagery to outline the digital age. I loved the image of the olive branch and how it is posted for all to see but no one can touch it. Everything you describe is so true that it has become common knowledge yet no one acknowledges it anymore. I look forward...