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Alone along the halls,
Observing who stands and who falls.
Beaten by those who boast power
And revolted by strangers.
Ruling their little worlds –
Do they even care? No, I haven’t heard.
It’s amazing how no one stands by me.
No one does - But no, I’m still not free.
I need someone to see –
See how reality’s killing me.
To take the pain way,
Assuring me everything’s okay.
I imagine how life would be,
If everyone’s actually jolly.
If no one else wonders how it seems
Then being lonely is fine with me.
It’s better to be on your own
Than to keep up with their hatred souls.
Acting like we are all clicking
But all we need is fixing.
~ P. M. Roya
crissy: Awesome work. The characters are so beautifully flawed and easy to relate to. The protagonist Bethany Hill is a woman that I would definitely want to meet in real life. The author has managed to make me visualize the story like a movie. The two time frames of past and present are also so beautifu...
maxniederhofer: Kara,I loved this. The one suggestion I would make is to show me, don't tell me. E.g."Now look at your skin / It is beautiful / You are beauty pure."It might be better to use more evocative imagery and language to make me feel, i.e. truly comprehend, the pure beauty, rather than telling me it is ...