Poems That Make You Feel Something

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Summary

When I'm feeling down the first thing I want to do is write poetry and here it is. These poems deal with my weaknesses, experiences, and the darkness of the world. Every story has a dark side... Fears rise when the light is gone, it makes you think about all you’ve done. Are you good? Did y0u do all you could? Are you the person you want to be? Or are you scared of what you see?

Genre:
Poetry / Drama
Author:
superwolf1967
Status:
Ongoing
Chapters:
14
Rating:
5.0 1 review
Age Rating:
13+

Darkness Can Consume You

Darkness is something everyone has touched;

it's kinda like drowning.
The darkness is pulling you down,
and you're trying your hardest to make it to the top;
to finally get that breath of air.
You try everything,
but nothing you do gets you to the surface,
you're stuck.
You use all your might to beat those waves,
and some get over,

while others drown.
Darkness makes you feel like everything around you is crumbling,
like even if you escape one wrong step could throw you back in.
It's like a stain,
once it touches you it never goes away,
not really.
Some escape,
others sink deeper and deeper until there's no light left.
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