This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.
Cue—of our time, you are; but, mine
Words, you reveals, occur in my mind
I’m pervert—you obey my tease
By then, you’ve been looking for me
My not set heart; yet, you are bold
Jealous with others, I’ll have you
Unsure, afraid, it’s our secret
By then, we have secretly met
I’ve wondered—you know my weakness?
Why are you wearing eyeglasses?
Your hair—are you tired cutting it?
Your fragrance, I’ll never forget
Our gifts, we have been holding hands
Those days, the choirs have been singing
We stroll in the park, sightseeing
In bench, clinging arms, we’re chatting
Oh lovely, again on this year
You dance, for me, with my request
Your hands run on your face and breast
You sit—lean your back on my chest
Warm of your skin that I embrace
I taste your cheek, I’m wanting more
Your eyes gaze down, showing afraid
I let our lips communicate
How clingy are they, cuddling
as we have been doing the same
What could become on us, you ask
Heaven knows, hereafter, I say
You lie at my arms while you smile
As our hearts speak still each other
My mind thinks like a breadwinner
Prideful, don’t care—others could say
Chatting as we recall our past
In tears, angry, and we both laugh
You ask me—my first love; you’re not
But you’re important than my crush
Under this blanket, you hug me
I’m tasting your neck once again
We extend—forget everything
with this spectacle of our lives
The wonderful plain that I see
My itching hand wants to portray
With this journey, I have a dream,
the adult—immature again
Talent isn’t what I pursue
Gadgets are for pass time only
Fame, I haven’t give important
But praising beauty is I am
We’re in tears, could we agree?
Different principles won’t joint
I have thought, you like, all of me
Now we think allover again
Annoying as you could have been;
yet, settled down if I embrace
You murmur yet can’t get angry
Typically, I’m in patience
My new request that you obey
I’m portraying your nude body
With this tempting activity
results to this pervertedness
How deep your gaze could be, you say,
I have a dream, can you agree?
Awkward yet we’re both speechless
Our heavy shoulders embrace
The day has come; that, we’ll decide
How nudely you come and hug me
With this temptation, you success
So relaxing, hands link again
Let’s cool off, I say, and we cry
Thanks for everything, you agree
We hug tightly marking our hearts,
embracing this last time, we cry
It’s for the better, we chorus
We’re still young, we chorus and smile
Maybe, not this time; but, later
Into this paragraph, we part
FateFellShort: I have read this story and have followed the writers on tumblr from the beginning. Its a wonderful story. Beautifully written with a really nice pace, that makes it enjoyable to read more than once. For me, fairy tail has very good characters but what the writers have done is give them more depth...
Prasino45: Hi! I happen to see your updated chapter on FF.NET!It happened to be about you coming onto Inkitt with this story! I've been a fan for a while! I'm a scqualphie writer myself. I ship them HARD! Love this story! I'm gonna do a reread as you said you changed some things! Glad we both made the switc...
Sandra Estrada: I loved every minute of it and I thank my lucky stars that brought me to the story, it's been a whirlwind of emotions, plot twist after plot twist but I never got tired of them. Abby and Kade's story is a hard one to understand but once you're submerged in their story and love, you can't help but...
Ben Gauger: Kudos go to the author of ''Equinox: Into the Clouds'' for originality in character development as well as scene execution and in addition plot development, A truly original story if I do say so myself, though the spelling in and of itself could use a little work, but other than that a truly orig...
Jade Jez: What a wonderful, immersive book from Eliott McKay. It starts with an air of mystery, introducing main character Michaela, the clumsy teenager. From there, it whisks you off your feet and dumps you into a beautifully written world where you can almost smell and hear everything happening. I go...
CurlyRed: I read this entire book in just under 4 hours I COULD NOT PUT IT DOWN! i found myself emotionally attached to the characters and making personal connections that i had never experienced before while reading a book! I was constantly wanting to read more, every chapter left me on a cliff hanger tha...
Flik: Hi! ^.^ huge fan of yours on ff.net! When I saw the note about this contest on The Way We Smile, I couldn't help but rush over here, create an account, and vote! XD Seriously love this story and would recommend it to anyone! :D best FT fanfiction out there. Amazing story, amazing concept that wa...
Animeviewer: It is one of the best stories I've ever read. This story will have you riding a roller coaster of emotions and nearly dying to know what happens next.You will get very attached to the characters and in my case I relate well with some of their very traumatic or emotional experiences, Just Juliet f...
263Adder: Okay so I adore this story. I only knocked one star off plot for historical inaccuracies because I'm a bit of a stickler for that. The ending broke my heart though, considering you already changed history couldn't you (SPOILER) change it a bit more and have them together!!!! I want an alternative...
Alex Reltin: This is a great story! I love how well you go into detail and emotions of Capri, and Mel. You have amazing dialogue and overall it's just a thrill to read!The only critique I could find is that some of the paragraphs should be separated. For example:-"If Nia would have just let me take the car an...
FreakyPoet: "you made me laugh, made me cry, both are hard to do. I spent most of the night reading your story, captivated. This is why you get full stars from me. Thanks for the great story!"
Sara Joy Bailey: "Full of depth and life. The plot was thrilling. The author's style flows naturally and the reader can easily slip into the pages of the story. Very well done."