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The Endless Race

By Pasan Madhusankha All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

The Endless Race

On this planet’s surface,

Many of us are in a huge rat race
Without stopping and being amazed
To realize,it doesn’t have a finishing place
It’s only a mirage.
When running more and more
We expect something more
Although we are sweating more

The race had a beginning
But there won’t be an ending
Until we stop the tiresome running
Even though it’s wealth earning
it is difficult for us to realize
That the Horizon can never be chased .
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CalvinPeat: This is a great concept, and you've done a largely excellent job of capturing the voice of Mal.You convey Mal's inner struggle well. Perhaps, though, you could reflect the hope in verses 13-17 of Psalm 90 a bit more. A suggestion: in the current version, Mal seems to be losing hope in the idea of...

preety_lady_serenity: I really liked the poem. It created this picture of a baroque style cafe that you kind of enter it to feel relaxed and yet you feel trapped due to outside circumstances.I especially loved the writing style, If one looks at it, it does look like a birdcage which is an excellent image to fit the po...

Medley_Cafe: By far my favorite of the three poems I saw you have! I was almost singing it for myself!Though if I may suggest a few changes that will make it flow even better?1st line make 'eye' 'eyes' as to rhyme with skies.2nd line end it with a full stop7th line "to see magic things"; make 'magic' 'magical...

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