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The Endless Race

By Pasan Madhusankha All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

The Endless Race

On this planet’s surface,

Many of us are in a huge rat race
Without stopping and being amazed
To realize,it doesn’t have a finishing place
It’s only a mirage.
When running more and more
We expect something more
Although we are sweating more

The race had a beginning
But there won’t be an ending
Until we stop the tiresome running
Even though it’s wealth earning
it is difficult for us to realize
That the Horizon can never be chased .
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