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The Endless Race

By Pasan Madhusankha All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

The Endless Race

On this planet’s surface,

Many of us are in a huge rat race
Without stopping and being amazed
To realize,it doesn’t have a finishing place
It’s only a mirage.
When running more and more
We expect something more
Although we are sweating more

The race had a beginning
But there won’t be an ending
Until we stop the tiresome running
Even though it’s wealth earning
it is difficult for us to realize
That the  Horizon can never be chased .
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Richard D. Cooper: I wish I could write poetry like this. It's clever because it also tells a story, too. I like the flow of it, the way sentences slip together as they should. Very good indeed. I have also started to read your others works, and will review them when finished. Keep going. Never stop.

maxniederhofer: Kara,I loved this. The one suggestion I would make is to show me, don't tell me. E.g."Now look at your skin / It is beautiful / You are beauty pure."It might be better to use more evocative imagery and language to make me feel, i.e. truly comprehend, the pure beauty, rather than telling me it is ...

Shubh Guru: when i'm reading this novel, I remember all my school days, all i feel like i m back to my old days, all the misery come to "bay" and how she come back like a shinning star are so good...this is my first book and i love this because it contains all the thing, love ,betrayl,losing some one who lo...

Barbara Ivusic: I really loved this poem. Perfect use of imagery to outline the digital age. I loved the image of the olive branch and how it is posted for all to see but no one can touch it. Everything you describe is so true that it has become common knowledge yet no one acknowledges it anymore. I look forward...