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By LunasChild8 All Rights Reserved ©

Other / Poetry

Chapter 1

When the sun’s rays goes to sleep,

And our heart is free from grief;

The starlight appears and glows,

And we know that we are home.


The love we have warms our tired souls,

When connected with others it make us whole;

And the wind caresses my hair,

When I call for you, I know you’re there.


In a land where light never fades,

A place where dawn transitions to day;

And the soil is fertile and warm,

A place where bonds can never be torn.


The sun and moon shall always dance,

Up in the sky to bloom their romance;

We on Earth are lively and free,

Across the lands and the seven seas.


From the starlight comes our hope,

Special beings that warm our soul;

And they show what we’ve always known,

The golden path that leads us on, to our true home.

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