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Please Be With Me

By Browniesarethebest All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Other

Chapter 1

‘Please be with me’

You say with a cry

‘I can’t’ he says

‘I’m sorry. Goodbye.’


You fall to your knees

Sobbing, shaking

You watch him walk away

And reach out, aching


You did this to yourself

Knowing who he was

Unfaithful, married

So why did you? Because


Love is very tricky

It catches you off guard

And the moment you saw him

He captured your heart


So you sit there crying

Tears falling down your cheeks

As his figure fades

The air fills with your weeps

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