Death and Other Optimistic Concepts

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You can't run, and you can't hide. One life, one heart, one soul. One chance at happily ever after. **** Poetry by yours truly, Seven. I hope you find some inspiration and motivation in my words! **** EXCERPT: letting go means endless days, pain, a cornucopia of pain. beautiful pain. enveloping you, choking you, until i come back and wrap you in my fervor. i will bring you home. i will show you the real you. i will let you go. i will make you finally devoid of reality. trust me.

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Crying Skies

one, two, three

the sky is crying

tears of exuberant beating

from the heart screaming for meaning

the only solace on a teeth chattering winter’s eve

the shred in the cloth, the burning mark given from demons and monsters who live in the darkest depths

four, five, six

wails heavy with plunging regret

shouts with walls crumbling down

smoldering ash, destroying time built energies

splitting seams sewn with timeless memories

the sky is weeping

one, two, three





but not ceaselessly

four, five, six

fight the dark

but the spark

is too dim

chances are slim

sky opens up

clouds light up

boom, and then-







𝑤ℎ𝑦𝑒𝑣𝑒𝑟 𝑛𝑜𝑡?

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