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We Had Love

By J. F. David All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Romance

Chapter 1

Oh, don’t believe that just because I made you fall for me, I’ll wait for you and stay with you. Nah, you shouldn’t believe in love, I stopped persuing the concept right after I gained consciousness, so I advice you do the same. What we had isn’t love, only a game, only fun.

But we had love and we made love, and in that moment I almost thought that maybe I was wrong, maybe there is that pure feeling that warms my heart.
Only if I had a heart.

What we had was an illusion, a passing heat for each other. I’m sorry you still believe in love, you still think we’re one. I give up and I give up on you, tears don’t move me; unlike you, I don’t care, I’m immortal.

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