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Poems of Heartbreak

By KatKilledKaity All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Blurb

This is just a collection of poetry I've written over the years. They're all inspired by break ups. I hope you enjoy! <3

Puzzle Pieces

They say don’t push pieces that don’t fit
But sometimes you need a little hit
They keep saying this isn’t real
But they don’t know how we feel

Don’t fit in where you don’t belong
But I hear you in every song
Please don’t ever fall in love
It never really ends in doves

No matter what I try to do
I’ll never find another you
Will you still love me tomorrow?
Please love away all my sorrow

I’m not okay not being yours
This whole thing is quite a chore
You’re smile is my favorite part
But all it does is break my heart

I’m pathetically in love with you
I’m sure you already knew
Its funny how fast things change
Now I feel all rearranged
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Laraine Smith: In addition to being humorous, this story is visual! This is also a beautiful story. Keep up the great work! :)

crissy: Awesome work. The characters are so beautifully flawed and easy to relate to. The protagonist Bethany Hill is a woman that I would definitely want to meet in real life. The author has managed to make me visualize the story like a movie. The two time frames of past and present are also so beautifu...

Laraine Smith: My only suggestion on the grammar is to use www.grammarcheck.net. I have it bookmarked on Google Chrome. I see myself in the determination in this beautiful story! I have Cerebral Palsy, and I have dreams that I have been working hard for, too! The humor made me laugh!

CalvinPeat: This is a great concept, and you've done a largely excellent job of capturing the voice of Mal.You convey Mal's inner struggle well. Perhaps, though, you could reflect the hope in verses 13-17 of Psalm 90 a bit more. A suggestion: in the current version, Mal seems to be losing hope in the idea of...

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