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Desire

By Adieu-KKZ All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

KKZ

Your light seeps through me

Engulfing me in its flame of melancholy

Calling for me to be at its side

I rush in haste

“Drink me” it drawls, fueling my reverie

Your repertoire of temptation emits boredom.

My eyes bleed as I tear my gaze away

Would a monster’s touch sully you?

Poison wrapped in sugar

The sun takes lay among the hills

Hate burns across my chest

One – just one

Would ensure sweet release

Death

Pain

Silence

It trickles, coils, kills-

Humanity

Sanity

Jaded, my limbs seek refuge

Your retreat follows

A game of cat and mouse I cannot shake

Fin

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Richard D. Cooper: I wish I could write poetry like this. It's clever because it also tells a story, too. I like the flow of it, the way sentences slip together as they should. Very good indeed. I have also started to read your others works, and will review them when finished. Keep going. Never stop.

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Barbara Ivusic: I really loved this poem. Perfect use of imagery to outline the digital age. I loved the image of the olive branch and how it is posted for all to see but no one can touch it. Everything you describe is so true that it has become common knowledge yet no one acknowledges it anymore. I look forward...