Nuts
A nut is
sitting in the rain.
Pain.
Two nuts are
drowning in the pain
what a shame.
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This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.
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A nut is
sitting in the rain.
Pain.
Two nuts are
drowning in the pain
what a shame.
Write a Review
Did you enjoy my story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks,
PushingIdeas
Medley_Cafe: By far my favorite of the three poems I saw you have! I was almost singing it for myself!Though if I may suggest a few changes that will make it flow even better?1st line make 'eye' 'eyes' as to rhyme with skies.2nd line end it with a full stop7th line "to see magic things"; make 'magic' 'magical...
crissy: Awesome work. The characters are so beautifully flawed and easy to relate to. The protagonist Bethany Hill is a woman that I would definitely want to meet in real life. The author has managed to make me visualize the story like a movie. The two time frames of past and present are also so beautifu...