Thoughts On Paper

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Thoughts on paper is a bunch of poems. Each chapter is different. Most go on how Ifeel l. I hope you relate and like it this is my first book and I hope you enjoy.

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I don't know what to draw.
I keep on erasing all of my creations.
My mind is blank.
I just can't think.
I am clueless.
I keep on trying, I do, I do.
You try to cheer me saying I will think of something.
But I can't.
I am clueless.
I move on to writing but it is the same.
My mind is blank.
I just can't think.
So I stare out my window at my desk.
My mind starts to wonder into a different world.
I watch the trees sway in the wind and hear the birds sing their song.
Then all of a sudden my head wasn't blank.
Ideas came rushing in extremely fast.
I was no longer clueless.
I drew some pictures and told a story.
I wrote for so long I lost track of time.
It has flyed by so fast.
The beauty of no longer not being clueless.
Hearing pencil and paper come together.
A wonderful sound I love to hear.
And a wonderful feeling when your no longer clueless.
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