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Los silbidos del bosque

By Entrecorchetes All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Colipi

Son las voces de colipi, los silbidos del bosque que con sus sonidos me alertan, ha nacido Lautaro, ha nacido Lautaro.

...hay un fuego
...hay un fuego
...ha nacido Lautaro

Y aún en la distancia del tiempo su nombre es un llamado que resuena en esta misma tierra, en los nombres ancianos, de bosques y ríos.

...estamos en guerra

Y esta guerra viejo amigx mío es por amor y no por tierra.

!Amor a Guacolda, a sus coloridos resoplidos,
entre sol y cultivo, su destino es mi destino!

Hay una razón que cantan los cantores, símbolo de cada árbol, escrita en la lluvia que viaja en sueños a todxs y a mi

Es una casa estrellada,

son tus cielos

y la muerte

...es toda mi gente


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maxniederhofer: Kara,I loved this. The one suggestion I would make is to show me, don't tell me. E.g."Now look at your skin / It is beautiful / You are beauty pure."It might be better to use more evocative imagery and language to make me feel, i.e. truly comprehend, the pure beauty, rather than telling me it is ...

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