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Los silbidos del bosque

By Entrecorchetes All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Colipi

Son las voces de colipi, los silbidos del bosque que con sus sonidos me alertan, ha nacido Lautaro, ha nacido Lautaro.

...hay un fuego
...hay un fuego
...ha nacido Lautaro

Y aún en la distancia del tiempo su nombre es un llamado que resuena en esta misma tierra, en los nombres ancianos, de bosques y ríos.

...estamos en guerra

Y esta guerra viejo amigx mío es por amor y no por tierra.

!Amor a Guacolda, a sus coloridos resoplidos,
entre sol y cultivo, su destino es mi destino!

Hay una razón que cantan los cantores, símbolo de cada árbol, escrita en la lluvia que viaja en sueños a todxs y a mi

Es una casa estrellada,

son tus cielos

y la muerte

...es toda mi gente


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CalvinPeat: This is a great concept, and you've done a largely excellent job of capturing the voice of Mal.You convey Mal's inner struggle well. Perhaps, though, you could reflect the hope in verses 13-17 of Psalm 90 a bit more. A suggestion: in the current version, Mal seems to be losing hope in the idea of...

KatKilledKaity: I like this. It's very relatable. I like the words you used and the style you wrote in. It reminds me of my poetry. Keep writing :)

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