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The Sinner

By J. F. David All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Other

Chapter 1

I was waiting for you to find me
I made you fall for me and teased you on muggy summer nightfalls
I played nice and charming
And it worked, you danced and you jumped never asked me why

I am the sinner but you are the hangman
The cause of your own downfall
I only helped you to take the first step
To dig your own grave, you were the one

I wore the face of a cute puppy
I made you fall for me, you fell for my tricks, believing my lies
I played nice and charming
And you sacrificed yourself hearing my crushing lines

I am the sinner but you are the hangman
The cause of your own downfall
I only helped you to take the first step
To dig your own grave, you were the one

I know I’m irresistible
Don’t even try
Avoiding me is useless
I’m already in your mind
I’m the sinner
I became one
In the moment you found me
Under the midnight sun

I am the sinner but you are the hangman
The cause of your own downfall
I only helped you to take the first step
Digging our grave with a casket for two
I am the sinner but you are the hangman
The cause of your own downfall
I only helped you to take the first step
To dig your own grave, you were the one

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