Few words by a bereaved!

All Rights Reserved ©


The pain of losing someone, The pain that you are left all alone by yourself, The pain of no longer sharing your feelings with each other, The pain of the feeling of that vanished hand, The pain you feel when you hear the echo of their voice, The pain they are no longer here with you to accompany you in this journey! That's the MOST UNBEARABLE pain ever. It's hard to come over that feeling. One day when you wake up and realize that person is no longer there for you and you are now all by yourself. You want it badly to be a dream but the reality is that is not the dream! It's reality...

5.0 2 reviews
Age Rating:

Why so early?

Everyone's gotta leave,
But why so early?
I feel like crying rivers,
Of my melancholy tears.
This place is now something else,
It is like the last leaf which fells.
I am dead inside and out,
I don't know if I will be able to stand out.
That's going to be hard,
To play without your part.
I will miss you,
For the very last time, I wish I could see you.
Live in peace wherever you will,
Just remember, I will be there thinking of you, still.
Continue Reading Next Chapter
Further Recommendations

Sarah Luongo: I'm a big fan of the format of the book- the concept of incorporating poems and within the story and sectioning off periods of the story with each poem. It made it easier to read, and made the unimaginable easier to comprehend. What some people may skip over may be the most important part in this...

Aby : I choose this because I’m the type of person that over thinks a lot and it helped me by being my self no matter what not everyone is going to like you but just be you

PumpkinCreams: I love how all of these poems are unique.It has a lot of beautiful imagery to them as well.The grammar is perfect. The stanzas could’ve been divided into neater stanzas but overall. Beautiful!

anabanana0329: This book is great if u are interested in Greek mythology.This book is a good book to read.The chapters are very short.But they talk about side gods that aren't the main ones.Its really cool.And I love it very much.

Tina Paan: I live reading about pirates. I didn't like about Prostitute 's sharing a room. I'd like to read the whole book. It's very unique and interesting. I'm recommending it for adults only. I'm from Fiji. Good job Erin. Stay safe.

Yashika: This one was one of the best things i ever read. I felt like my heart speaking those words. It was like I'm reading my thoughts poured out by someone in the most beautiful manner. These 72 poems are my favourite for the rest of my life now. And the most mesmerizing lines were " You brole me, He h...

Evie Olson: This book is amazing 👏. I am so glad i found this hidden gem. I can't stop reading it haha totally binge reading it. I must say that this book is gonna be in my favorite read over and over category haha love love love it!

Author: I cried and laughed. I loved the book so much after the first one! The poetry caught my feelings of guard. I cried so many tears, I loved it all!

Alline Tanner: Nice book enjoying it very funny can't stop laughing

More Recommendations

KayKayBrianne: Need to read this book asap aspa aspap

chambi: Very well crafted. Excellent style. Cannot recommend it enough. I was hooked to it from start to finish

Laraine Smith: In addition to being humorous, this story is visual! This is also a beautiful story. Keep up the great work! :)

About Us

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered publisher, providing a platform to discover hidden talents and turn them into globally successful authors. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books our readers love most on our sister app, GALATEA and other formats.