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Life and Love , Hope and Pain

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A collection of my feelings and thoughts of my inner child incorporated on paper ...

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She looked at me with those beautiful eyes
And all I could see was loneliness inside
She looked so sad and I wanted to ask
In the shine of her smile I wanted to bask
I held her hand and told her that I ,
Would never be apart but it turned out a lie
If only I could say how it ached my heart
To leave her broken and so torn apart
But I needed to do it cause I thought it was right
I forgot that at the end there's always a light
I needed to do it , I couldn't STAY
So , I ended up going too far away
Now , when I went back to atone for my wrongs
I saw her laughing and singing a song
I came to know that she had left far behind
Her pains and hurts and her trust for me blind
I am writing it now as a warning to you
Never leave your loved ones cause there's always a clue
There's always a path , There's always a way
So don't you leave , remember to STAY ...

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17mysery: The first two chapters made me think this was a book of poetry but by that time I was so hooked I decided to go on. I really liked this. It's the perfect comfort read for when you're feeling down. Noelle being the artist was a little too obvious and the cover of the book could use a little work b...

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