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You say it first,
take one word and make it talk.
Or better yet, make it sing.
Take a few more, meld them together
and create a song;
a love song only I can hear.
One that I can hold as if it were a satin sheet,
soft against my cheek.
Then take my heart in your hands and smile,
as if it means the world to you.
Give me the breath you expel,
and allow me to keep it as if it were a gift
from your soul unto my own.
Sit with me beneath a tree;
a willow with small leaves
that whisper in the wind.
Hold out your hand and grasp my own.
Then allow me to kiss your fingers
because they speak to me,
while your voice brings me to tears.
Do these things and all my wishes will be there,
within my eyes, as salty drops roll down my face.
I speak, I tell you what I need for you to hear.
I love you…can you see it like a flame,
Can you tell by the way my body shivers…
not from the cold but from the heat between us?
If you can, then kiss me with your tender lips
and allow me to feel your love,
just as you feel mine for you.
SandraHan1: This story is very descriptive, with vivid scenes from the very beginning, which made for a good scene setting. I love the symbolism in names, such as “Naysayers”, “Hadd”, etc . The story itself is revolutionary, intriguing, emotional and exciting. I was very pleased to see that there is a happy ...
Laraine Smith: My only suggestion on the grammar is to use www.grammarcheck.net. I have it bookmarked on Google Chrome. I see myself in the determination in this beautiful story! I have Cerebral Palsy, and I have dreams that I have been working hard for, too! The humor made me laugh!
William Elliott Kern: Long story, the plot uncovered midway through the story. From beginning, the story was fast moving. Then dragged on for quite some time. The Author was good in describing her characters, their clothing, etc. but a lot of that disclosure distracted from the story moving fast.Not withstanding, the...
_Dusks_kiss: I never knew that one of my favourite childhood cartoons could turn into such a beautiful story. Tho there are many grammatical errors and writing errors, this story warmed my heart to 100%. I would definitely want this book to get published and I would also buy it. It’s amazing character develop...
Ro-Ange Olson: This is such a different romance story. I loved it. The book was very long and could be split into 2-3 books in my opinion, but I'd hate to have to wait to read the next part too. I loved the chapter from Darius's point of view. It was a really different way for the writer to cover time and also ...