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A/N ~ I wrote this very late at night, definitely not the best poem ive ever written, this poem is about mental illness so if you are sensitive about that type of stuff, I would not recommend reading it, but I have many other poems to post that are a lot lighter so feel free to go check those out !!

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Chapter 1

unreal - free verse poem

Life is unclear

Words left unsaid

People seem fake

Almost, undead

I wish i knew

What was coming next

this unclear world

Is vague, at best

Life flashes by

In snippets and clips

I keep getting tireder

I cant deal with this shit

Everyone lies

To me and to you

Everyone smiles

Even when they feel blue

This world,

So bland

Just water,

And sand

I Wish there were some colour

Some magical colour

That could make sense

Of all this sand and this water

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