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The Brighter The Light The Darker The Shadows

By Lizzy Roberts All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Hidden


Why do we keep ourselves from the world?

Why do we hide behind others faults?

We need to show ourselves to the world,

We are all beautiful in our own way.

When we hide we become something we don’t want to be.

We become part of that person we became in the darkness.

Why would you hide yourself from others?

Becoming something you’re not,

Nobody likes a fake,

Quit being a Barbie,

Break from that shell.


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crissy: Awesome work. The characters are so beautifully flawed and easy to relate to. The protagonist Bethany Hill is a woman that I would definitely want to meet in real life. The author has managed to make me visualize the story like a movie. The two time frames of past and present are also so beautifu...

ChethanaRM: I love this story so much! It is wonderfully written and the characters are perfectly portrayed!

Laraine Smith: In addition to being humorous, this story is visual! This is also a beautiful story. Keep up the great work! :)

Kei Angelus: Hello!I'm looking for short stories to adapt into scripts, and this one is one of them :)I think your poetry writing style is a little similar to mine. I like how you relate the Anxiety to the other emotions. I could already imagine how I can 'translate' this into a play.So, do you mind if someda...

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