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BONUS CHAPTER: Gretchen, Meet Cal. The Real Intro


So I'm editing this book as it was my first ever one. I'm only up to chapter 5, and it needs serious work. But I noticed some scenes were missing, and this is then first one I wanted to add. Their first ever time <3


Linzvonc x

His mouth was on mine, his tongue dancing deliciously with mine as I felt myself moan against him. His fingers moved slowly under my top, dancing against my skin as he gazed at me, his head moving down so his lips could meet the skin now cold without his fingers. I looked down, seeing his mop of blonde hair resting on my stomach as he trailed kisses down to the tip of my jeans. He looked up at me as he loosened the buttons, hearing me gasp with anticipation. I was beyond nervous, but it was because his beauty made me that way. His manly presence left me awe, after years of dealing with mere boys. He may be the same age, but for some reason he was worlds apart. His lips kissed the bare skin left behind from the waistband of my jeans that he had slid down, ever so slightly. My breathing hitched as he sat up on his knees, tugging my jeans off slowly as he discarded them on the floor.

His gaze swept up my thighs, settling on my underwear which I feared was revealing far too much of my core. He pulled off his t shirt, dropping it to the floor as my breathing increased, my lungs gasping for air as I studied his perfect form. He sank to his knees, his mouth littering soft kisses on my inner thighs as air inhaled sharply. I'd done this before with Luke, and it wasn't something I'd ever enjoyed. But he continued, his fingers lacking with mine as he moved further up to my core, sliding my underwear down my thighs as he smirked at me.

"Let me do this, and I promise you'll enjoy it." He murmured confidently, as I sank back into the bed, my fingers gripping the sheets as he suddenly buried his head in between my thighs. His tongue slid expertly between my folds as I felt myself shudder with delight. I bit my lip as he sucked on my clit, his finger ever so softly moving around the entrance to my core as I clenched instinctively.

"Relax baby. I can stop anytime you want me to."

His breath on my exposed core made me tingle and shiver, as he suddenly alid his finger softly inside of me, muttering under his breath.

"I won't last with you."

I arched my back as he moved his mouth against me, my body bucking against him as he reduced me to a wreck. Everytime I felt close, he stopped, kissing me softly.

"Cal, I'm ready." I gasped, pulling him up to me, his throbbing cock pressing against my wet slit as I began to shiver in delight.

"Oh I don't know if you are, Raven." He murmured against me, his lips suddenly on my neck as I felt him grab something from the bedside table. I kissed him, noting the taste of me on his tongue as he shifted me carefully beneath him. His breathing was heavy as he lifted the condom packet for me to see.

"Are you absolutely sure?"

"Cal, please." I begged as he tore it open with his teeth, pulling out the condom as I watched him roll it onto his alarmingly large cock.

"I can stop, anytime." He murmured again, as I nodded. I was part terrified, part desperate to feel him inside of me, when I felt it press against me. I bit my lip as I arched back, sucking in a breath. He continued to move slowly, gazing at me as I tried to ignore the agonising pain. Where was the pleasure everyone spoke of?

"Baby, it will hurt. It will feel better soon, I swear. Do you want me to stop?" He whispered as he held himself up on his forearms, gazing at me intensely as I shook me head.

"No. Just do it the way you think." I managed.

He nodded, his mouth on mine as he kissed me, moving slowly inside of me as my body tried to accommodate his size, the walls stretching around him as I saw him bite his lip as though it was causing him pain too.

"Ok, it's in, all the way. I'll go as slow as I can."

As he moved inside of me I gripped his back, as the pain began to subside, replaced by an insanely pleasurable feeling. Combined with his delicious kisses and his voice in my ear, I began to see what all the fuss was about.

"Oh god, Cal, yes." I moaned, as he laughed softly against me.

"Sshh, you've still gotta be quiet."

It was then that as my pain subsided, he began to pick up pace, making me moan so loudly he covered my mouth with his.

"I swear, I won't last if you keep moaning like that."

I didn't care, my fingers digging into his back as he groaned, leaning up to watch his cock slide in and out of me slowly.

"You're insane, Gretchen."

I lifted my legs around him as he buried himself deeply inside of me, my hands clawing at him as he finally lost himself. His body was slick with sweat as his finger slid down to my core, massaging my sweet spot as I covered my own mouth from crying out as I felt my body spasm in a way I had never experienced before.

"Cal." I moaned as he seemed to halt for a minute, holding his breath before he gasped loudly, letting out groans as he seemed to shudder between my thighs. Had he come? I lay completely still, as I heard him chuckle softly in my ear.

"Are you ok? I'll take it out now, real slowly."

I gazed at him as he moved from within me, leaving me feeling totally empty. How had I ever felt complete before? He stood up, handing me some tissues as he smiled.

"You're incredibly wet."

I cringed, pushing the tissue between my thighs as I felt the intense wetness. I panicked when I saw blood on the tissue, but it was combined with alot of my own juices that I didn't worry too much.

"Its normal to bleed. Don't panic." He said softly, walking over to me as he helped slide my underwear back up, rubbing his hands on my thighs as he gazed at me.

"Are you alright? How was it?"

I sat up, pushing my hair out of my eyes as I stared at him.

"Are you for real right now? That was... mindblowing. How many girls have you been with exactly?' I exclaimed as his eyes widened.

"Its irrelevant." He said dismissively as I frowned.

"Why is it?" I demanded, as he held my gaze.

"Because now none exist. It's only you. I've got a feeling you're gonna be my forever."

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