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SICKNESS DEBATE

By Sheila Woolum All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Romance

SICKNESS DEBATE

As I blow out your lies from my head, I find that my eyes are beyond this prison in my mind, we cannot blame no one but ourselves, we cannot fear nothing because were dead, we are feeding upon the bones upon our flesh we fall beyond our face and its our fault

giving my dreams you fall you take my life away , you take my breath away , you find yourself without the dead it's all over its my dream your dead ,

I care so much , I see my own touch , forgive when I am without you , kindness calling your lies your fate, your walking on my heart your walking on my fate you call my name I am about to take , your lies

You found yourself falling in the game something we both knew , your full of lies I feel it too, your sweet without our heart your lies your fears your open in my tears,

I am without my own mind , selfishness calling my head games you're falling upon your clouds calling her name your blaming me with your head games, your calling her name I feel your pain , I am without my own sanity I am without my own mind your my sickness my flesh ,

give me air , give me your heart, I am without myself I am without my fate, give me your time it's always too late

Sickness debate,

Song" Sheila Woolum (c) 2015 OCTOBER .


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