Jack & Jill

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Jack & Jill I am going to tell you my almost average love story from my POV It’s not that bad, is it? I fell in love with my brothers best friend... Follow me as I show you my life in love. I promise you it’s interesting. I know what your thinking, it couldn’t be that bad, could it? Yes, and it is. I hope you like romance cause this is gonna be one hell of a ride.

Romance / Drama
Jameson Melton
5.0 1 review
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1 ~ His Precious Blue Eyes...

Wednesday, September 25 at 5:03 pm.

Today is the day I met the boy of my dreams. I walk into my house, I live with my brother and sister. Of course, Johns best friend is over, Jack. I mean I don’t like my brother, but I pretend like I do just so Jack can come over. Ahhhh his eyes, his precious blue eyes. He needs someone else’s eyes to stare in.

“Hey, Jack.” I say nervously

“What’s up, Jill!?” He says in a very enthusiastic tone.

“Nothing much, ya know?” I say stroking my long hair.

“Your acting... weird. Is everything okay?” My brother asks.

“Yes, it is.” I say hinting at him to leave.

“I’ll be right back Jack.” John tells Jack as he gets up and heads to the bathroom.

“So... how have you been?” I ask Jack.

“Good, how is yours?” He replies.

“Mine, it’s good.” I say.

“Well that’s good...” He says in a questionable tone.

“Jack, I just wanted to say, you make me so happy, and your just so cute. I like you Jack, a lot” I tell him.

“Wait what?” He asks.

“Yes, it’s true. You just make me so happy and the truth is I wanna spend every second with you, your so nice. It makes me so happy when John invites you over cause I know I get to to see you.” I tell him.

“Well, I feel the same Jill. Your amazing and the only real reason why I come over here half of the time is the same reason why I make you happy.” He replies.

“Awww... really?” I ask.

“Of course. Jill, I would really like to talk more maybe we can go grab something to eat sometime?” He asks.

“Omg, that would be great. I will text you.” I reply.

“Great, so I don’t know if I should tell John or not cause he might be kinda mad. I like the only friend he really has” He tells me.

“I mean we don’t have to tell him, he can figure it out when time comes. I just wanna be with you and if that means not telling him so be it” I beg to him.

We talk for a little while longer and find out some good dates for us to go out one night. I just love him, whenever we were talking the only thing that I could see was his precious blue eyes. He’s so amazing.

“Alright well I should probaly go...” I tell him.

“No” He says grabbing my hand and sitting me down on the bed.

“Hehee, what are you doing?” I ask as he slips his hand up my shirt and takes my shirt off.

I assist and take my pants off and he takes his pants, he’s on top of me, the boy of my dreams, this feels so good and amazing. I love him.

“Wowwwww... that was amazing” I tell him.

“I could do better” He replies.

I look in the precious blue eyes of his and right before our lips touch I hear, “Knock... Knock... Knock” and then a creeping sound of the doe opening.

“Shit, shit, shit”

Ugh oh...
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